18 | | * JP: CDR. Pg 8, five cavities is not correct. Eqn 2.1 units are not correct, should be mass & not energy. Beta0 equation wrong. Gabor lens injector for lens 1 & 2 is downstream, not upstream. Wien filter for velocity selection. Eqn 2.9 should be sigma p, text changed to momentum. Stage 2 operation beam aperture is fine, better reason is emittance issue. Markus ion chamber volume times 10^-8, Fig. 21.6 replot with right axis for dispersion. 32. Remove emittance of ϵx,y = 99 m from page 35. 2.14 table to be removed, repaeting 2.12. Stage 2 dose estimation β= p/E, where p and E. The design of the FFA magnet requires the kicker magnet to bend the beam by 90◦, such a magnet is feasible is wrong. |
| 18 | * JP: A number of issues in the CDR need correcting: |
| 19 | * Pg. 8; there should be no specified number of RF cavities. Five is only in the schematic diagram & has no physical basis for being that number. |
| 20 | * Pg. 9; eqn 2.1 units are not correct. The E_I term should be mass, not energy. |
| 21 | * Pg. 10 (2.2.3 paragraph 2); the β0 equation is wrong, should be p_0 c/E_0. |
| 22 | * Pg. 11 (2.3.1 paragraph 3); the Gabor lens injector for lens 1 & 2 is downstream, not upstream. |
| 23 | * Pg. 13 (paragraph 1); a Wien filter should be for velocity selection, not momentum. |
| 24 | * Pg. 19 (paragraph 1); eqn 2.9 should be sigma p, and the text immediatley afterwards changed to the proton-momentum distribution. |
| 25 | * Pg. 27 (paragraph 1); larger apertures can be used in the dipole so Stage 2 operation beam aperture is actually fine. The following sentences should be removed: |
| 27 | {{{ |
| 28 | The construction of a switching dipole with the aperture required to reduce beam loss to an acceptable level would not be feasible. Consequently, the LhARA injection had to be modified |
| 29 | to transport beams successfully to the FFA. |
| 30 | }}} |
| 31 | |
| 32 | * Pg. 30 (paragraph 2); the Markus ion chamber volume is wrong, it should be 4.4 × 10^-8 (missing minus sign). |
| 33 | * Pg. 31 (paragraph 2); figure 21.6 MADX dispersion is wrong. WS believes the wrong axis is plotted. WS to replot with the right axis for dispersion. |
| 34 | * Pg. 32 (paragraph 2); the following text is not correct & should be removed. |
| 35 | |
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| 37 | while the flexible-energy extraction made possible by the design of a flexible, efficient beam-extraction system. |
| 38 | }}} |
| 39 | * Pg. 35 (paragraph 3); the emittance in the following text is not correct. The emittance cannot be optimised anyway (assumed constant) so it should be removed. |
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| 41 | and an emittance of ϵx,y = 99 m |
| 42 | }}} |
| 43 | * Pg. 37; table 2.14 should be removed, it's repeating 2.12. The reference to the table on page 36 should be updated to 2.12. |
| 44 | * Pg. 42 (2.4.5 paragraph 2); equation β=p/E is wrong, should be β=pc/E, |
| 45 | * Pg. 51 (2.5.4 paragraph 2); the follwoing sentences are not correct & must be removed: |
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| 47 | The design of the FFA magnet requires the kicker magnet to bend the beam by 90◦, such a magnet is feasible is wrong. |
| 48 | }}} |
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