| 1 | Reviewer 1; notes and actions KL; 10Jul20 |
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| 2 | ============================= |
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| 3 | |
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| 4 | Notes from review: |
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| 5 | ------------------ |
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| 6 | 1. As suggested by review 2; need to compress and make more robust. JPar |
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| 7 | 2. PUSH back; detail is required for critical reading and to allow KL |
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| 8 | interested experts to validate our claims. |
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| 9 | 3. OK; we can answer some of these questions; some questions we can KL |
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| 10 | not answer. |
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| 11 | 4. OK; the answer is cost and efficiency. Need to make more clear CW |
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| 12 | the reasons wht we have chosen the Gabor lens and that the |
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| 13 | solenoid fall-back froms at a price. |
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| 14 | 5. Yes, this is a good point. We need to address it as it helps KL |
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| 15 | hone our message. Indeed, LhARA is a proof of principle for |
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| 16 | technologies that can be developed for the clinic. Need to |
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| 17 | update text and respond in cover letter. |
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| 18 | 6. Should we add comments in the motivation? JPar |
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| 19 | Also, justify from patients point of view. |
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| 20 | 7. Hmm -- OK, lets re-adjust this. KL |
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| 21 | 8. Address by making revisions required and arguing that the KL |
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| 22 | article is a consistent whole in the cover letter. |
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| 23 | 9. Repeat of 1. JPar |
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| 24 | 10. OK. TSD |
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| 25 | 11. Consider in revision. JPar |
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| 26 | 12. Consider in revision. JPar |
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| 27 | 13. Consider in revision. KL |
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| 28 | 14. OK, check and implement! TSD |
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| 29 | 15. Consider in revision. KL |
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| 30 | 16. Consider in revision. KL |
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| 31 | 17. Minor text revision. WS/JPa |
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| 32 | 18. Push back in cover letter. KL |
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| 33 | 19. Consider in revision. KL |
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| 34 | 20. Consider in revision. KL |
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| 35 | 21. Agreed. Small txt update. KL |
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| 36 | 22. Consider in revision. JPar/KL |
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| 37 | 23. Consider in revision. JPar/KL |
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| 38 | |
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| 39 | Notes from "comments": |
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| 41 | 1. As in 1. above; revise text. JPar |
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| 42 | 2. Respond in cover letter; some changes in txt will be referre to. KL |
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| 43 | 3. Actions noted in 11 above, add comment in cover letter. KL |
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| 45 | -------- -------- // -------- -------- |
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| 47 | Reviewer 2; notes and actions KL; 10Jul20 |
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| 48 | ============================= |
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| 49 | |
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| 50 | Notes from review: |
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| 52 | 1. Need reference to timescales in response. JPar/KL |
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| 53 | Revise text/references. |
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| 54 | 2. As in Reviewer1, 1. Update text. JPar |
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| 55 | 3. As in Reviewer1, 1. Update text. JPar |
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| 56 | 4. Explain space-charge limit; short text JPa |
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| 57 | 5. Reference (perhaps text revision?) OE |
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| 58 | 6. Fix in caption WS |
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| 59 | 7. Agreed; revise sentence and provide reference. OE |
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| 60 | 8. Discuss: do we need a plot? Add reference at least. OE |
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| 61 | 9. Add sentence to explain. CW |
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| 62 | 10. Potential repetition; consider revision. OE/KL |
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| 63 | 11. Potential repetition; consider revision. OE/KL |
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| 64 | 12. Fix figure (bright colours); fix caption (description) WS |
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| 65 | 13. Answer question in cover letter. WS/JPar |
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| 66 | 14. It can; update text, address in cover letter. JPar/KL |
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| 67 | 15. Add sentence with requested information. JPa/JPar |
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| 68 | 16. Add comment in caption. HTL |
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| 69 | 17. Address in text? Also, push back in cover letter. GS/AP |
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| 71 | Notes from comments: |
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| 73 | 1. Take issue with the characterisation that this is not KL |
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| 74 | science (!) in cover letter. |
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| 75 | 2. Push back on reproducibility in cover letter. WS/JPa/KL |
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| 77 | |
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| 78 | Push back on Q6; Would like to point Gabor lens and acceleration --> unique. |
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| 80 | -------- -------- // -------- -------- |
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| 82 | Calorimeters at NPL for dose; Tony Price. |
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